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WIP stern stare update. by ~ShadowRaze:iconShadowRaze:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Fantasy

©2009 ~ShadowRaze
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Artist's Comments

okay so the art block is killing me now. ...literally

seeming that i had these lines down i thought id try work on it more.

His hair looks gay i know and i dnt know whether to remove the iris from the eyes.?

Cant draw hair for toffee :(

mind you at the moment i cant draw anything for toffee XD

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~Chuuurls Jun 13, 2009, 9:33:50 PM
Behehe, he is so stern. XD even if you say you have an art block, I still like how it's turned out.
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~steampunkarcherydude Jun 13, 2009, 11:44:50 PM
loooks great, personally, i'd keep the irises (irsi??) ...((iris??).. hmmm yea, i'd keep those things, as they add so much realism to your drawings, also, (and dnt take this the wrong way) but ya might wanna think about changing the big number "3" on his chin LOL, just a suggestion, but its up to u, just i dont think it looks as good as your normal work with faces (its still really good, dont get me wrong, its just the chin lol.) also your hair looks pretty darn good, just add some texture lines in the middle and hey- presto!! instant cool looking hair !! hope that helps (if at all DX)

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~GreenSprite Jun 14, 2009, 12:23:25 AM
I actually like that 3, I hadn't noticed it until you mentioned it :D
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~steampunkarcherydude Jun 14, 2009, 12:43:43 AM
lolz XDDD yea, i dunno, i just think theres something.... hmmm mebbe its just me LMAO

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~darkph3onix Jun 14, 2009, 1:04:20 AM
im surprised you dislike it? it was an instant like for me? unless its one of those things where it wasnt the image you had in your head?
Al looks mega p'd off! i wouldnt wanna make fun of his boots right now 0_0
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~Tzeendhar Jun 14, 2009, 1:28:38 AM
Nah keep the iris, it increases the level of realism in the piece. And the hairs certainly doesn't look gay, on the contrary my friend it looks really good.:)
(Plus people had really wierd haircuts in the dark ages anyway XD)

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~hugeanticpeanut Jun 14, 2009, 2:11:05 AM
I love it XD and why do you think all my chars are bald? XD
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~soxrule Jun 14, 2009, 2:29:02 AM
Looks great so far and I like the little demon guy on his shoulder!!:clap:

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=kalmanen Jun 14, 2009, 2:41:56 AM
I think you could leave the irises, unless you want that demonic/blind kind of feeling to his eyes. It also gives more focus to his gaze :) This is a very good sketch, I hope your art block goes away soon...

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~NinjaMasterTK Jun 14, 2009, 4:12:53 AM
Looks good to me! Removing the iris might be a good idea, it always makes man eyes look cooler plus, he IS a vampire so you can easily explain it away.
Killer lines as per.

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